That was great - I really like El's role, and also that Peter is using how well he can get inside Neal's head as part of the bdsm play. I like how you balance Peter's sweet and sadistic sides too. I love that Peter knows Neal doesn't want a soft touch and I LOVE that Peter has doubts about the part of him sometimes that wants to make Neal cry.
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Date: 2011-04-27 06:01 am (UTC)