I loved this fic, it was really good. But now I'm going to go all annoying and say something.
There were a few times when you put Peter into it, Nathan's dreams at the beginning, wondering if he ached for Peter the same way he ached for Claire... those types of things. I couldn't help but wonder about what would happen when Peter came back, you know? Would he be disgusted with what they were doing, would he be jealous, would he want to join in? And now here's where the annoying part comes in... it would be absolutely awesome if you did a sequel with Peter in it and his reaction to Nathan and Claire's relationship. I know getting sequel requests are annoying but, well, I just think it would be awesome.
I also wanted to say that this was hot and sweet and absolutely awesome. Thank you for it. :)
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Date: 2008-08-25 03:09 am (UTC)There were a few times when you put Peter into it, Nathan's dreams at the beginning, wondering if he ached for Peter the same way he ached for Claire... those types of things. I couldn't help but wonder about what would happen when Peter came back, you know? Would he be disgusted with what they were doing, would he be jealous, would he want to join in? And now here's where the annoying part comes in... it would be absolutely awesome if you did a sequel with Peter in it and his reaction to Nathan and Claire's relationship. I know getting sequel requests are annoying but, well, I just think it would be awesome.
I also wanted to say that this was hot and sweet and absolutely awesome. Thank you for it. :)