"I want you on your knees," he says.

*whimper*

This was very, very good. I loved Insecure!Snape, and your Lucius was dark chocolate delicious. Mmmm. The pacing was excellent -- He thinks he would very much like to run his fingers through Malfoy's hair. made a shiver run down my spine, and I hardly breathed at all through the rest of it. Bravo!