Oh, wow, thank you so much for the wonderful and well-thought feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed this little labour of love Jay and I put together. A mere thank you can't possibly ever be enough, but, thank you.

Lorne asking Sheppard to put him down if he had to....wow, so touching.

Lorne was in Jay's hands at that point in the story, and reading that particular paragraph hit me like a punch to the gut. It was just amazing. She amazes me a lot, actually. :)